Saturday, September 6, 2008

FEELINGS

FEELINGS ( Written By :- Subhasis Mukherjee )
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Have you felt thy sight,
That makes your heart go wild,
Pounding like the ocean waves
And you gazing like a child.

Have you felt thy thought,
That makes you go spellbound,
Lips unfolding unconcious smile
And nobody intruding around.

Have you felt thy touch,
That makes your heart go warm,
Someone holding you close and tight
And everywhere outside is the storm.

Have you felt thy time,
That makes you want to say words,
Words, that you couldnot tell
And telling not makes you hurt.

Have you felt thy love,
That makes you feel to be poor,
Toring apart your inside out
And crying helplessly for sure.

Have you felt thy night,
That makes you look in the sky,
Speechless moonlight reminding you
That somebody has left behind.

Have you felt thy stranger,
Who is wandering by,
Used to be your somebody
Until you knew it was a lie.

Have you felt thy wind,
Whispering by your ear,
Endless chants of wordless tunes
Reminding you of someone dear.

Have you felt thy rain,
Pouring down your cheeks,
Tears running warm and wild
And making your eyes bleak.

Have you felt thy feeling,
That makes you crave for more,
Life is what that really is
And will never leave you poor.
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4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Very nicely done....I really respect a writer who uses vocabulary from the "days of old",you are very talented & creative,the"SHAYXPIERRIAN"said that....
"SHAYXPIERRE"

Anonymous said...

It takes me high and lowers me down. It speaks of a type love that doesn't last. It takes you to the max and then drops you flat. You wait for it to work only to have the release by setting yourself free. It's the way life can be. Sometimes you need to learn to move on!

Anonymous said...

Keep up the good work! Hope to see more poetry about everyday stuff like war, religion, government, you know...the stuff that ticks everyone off!

Peace

Just a writer said...

I like it, it's pretty.